.. Self Evaluation ..

Mr Bush's Feedback On Presentation ...

WWW ...

> Explains Significance - Strong Introduction
> Simple Slides - Good Colour Scheme
> References to Media Language/ Representaion (Clothing)
> I Knew my text very well
> Fluent articualte style
> Very Comprehensive
> Good Expression
> Vocabulary ( Nuclear Family )
> Detailed Character Study
> Covered most key points
> Engaging ending - predicting next season

EBI ...

> More media terminolgy
> Need to explain more ideology/ institution
> Focus less on characters
> Too descriptive on characters
> Speak more about connatations


Significance ---> 2
Structure ----> 2
Simplicity ---> 1
Rehearsal ---> 2

TOTAL ----> 7

Blog ...

> More reaserch (reviews/articles)
> Not enough images etc.

Class Feedback On Presentation ...

WWW ...

> Good Structure
> Good Rehearsal
> Didn't read off board
> Well Presented
> Simple/ Eye Catching
> Main Strength - Characters
> Linked back to todays society
> Expanded on points
> Fluent
> Good Expression
> Wide vocabulary
> Office Voice

EBI ..

> More Reaserch ( secondary proof)
> Need more information on ideologies and values
> More Media Termonology